第四册:流利英语 · 全册易错点 · 第23–45课
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L23 · 现在分词状语与逻辑主语
Watching the bird, its wings looked wide 错把 wings 当观察者;可改为 As I watched the bird, its wings looked wide。
对照例句: Gliding above the field, the bird turned towards the hills.
Gliding… 为伴随分词状语,逻辑主语为 the bird,与 turned 的主语一致。
L24 · 否定或限制副词前置倒装
Rarely two viewers notice… 缺倒装;Rarely do two viewers notices… 又错误地给实义动词加 s。
对照例句: Rarely do two viewers notice exactly the same details in a painting.
Rarely 前置触发 do two viewers 的部分倒装;notice 保持原形;不是把整句完全颠倒。
L25 · 名词化与施事信息
exposure of noise 应改 exposure to noise;coincided with 也不能自动替换为 caused。
对照例句: A reduction in background noise coincided with fewer interruptions during the task.
A reduction… 是名词化主语;coincided with 只说明同时发生,没有直接宣称因果。
L26 · 完成式分词状语
Having compared the layers, a sequence was proposed 容易让 sequence 成为比较者;应明确主语 researchers。
对照例句: Having compared the layers, the researchers proposed a tentative sequence of events.
Having compared 表先行完成动作;researchers 同时是 compare 和 propose 的执行者;tentative 限定结论。
L27 · 第三条件句与过去反事实
If the model would have been tested 错把结果形式放入条件;应写 had been tested。
对照例句: If the model had been tested earlier, the designers might have noticed the imbalance.
had been tested 是过去完成时被动条件;might have noticed 表对过去替代结果的谨慎推测。
L28 · 间接问句与疑问语序
Could you explain what does this term mean? 错用直接问句语序;应去 does 并用 means。
对照例句: Could you explain what this term means in plain language?
Could you explain 是礼貌主句;what this term means 为宾语从句,this term 在 means 前。
L29 · 使役与许可结构
allows the model move 缺少 to;不要把 allow 的结构误套成 make 的结构。
对照例句: The air cushion allows the model to move across the smooth floor.
allows + the model + to move 是宾语加不定式补足语;air cushion 为提供条件的主语。
L30 · 介词 + which 的关系从句
under that the sensor operates 不成立;介词前置的关系结构用 which。
对照例句: The pressure under which the sensor operates must be recorded.
under which 修饰 pressure;主句主语是整个名词短语,must be recorded 为谓语。
L31 · 独立主格的主语与分词
不要把独立主格误写成 The clay was still damp, the sculptor covered…;两个完整句不能仅用逗号连接。
对照例句: The clay still damp, the sculptor covered the model before leaving.
The clay still damp 有自己的主语 clay 和形容词 damp,补充背景;主句主语是 sculptor。
L32 · 形容词前置的 as 让步结构
As the evidence is limited 通常更容易读成“因为证据有限”;要保留让步意思可用 Although 或前置 Limited as。
对照例句: Limited as the evidence is, it gives us a reason to repeat the experiment.
Limited 前置,as 引导让步;it 指 evidence;主句主张重复检验而不是立即接受结论。
L33 · 平行结构与 not only…but also
to question claims, comparing sources and explanations 不平行;应统一为三个动词短语。
对照例句: The course teaches students to question claims, compare sources and explain their conclusions.
to 后三个动词 question、compare、explain 并列,共享不定式标记 to,宾语分别对应各动作。
L34 · 倾向表达与概率范围
tend to 不等于 always;不能将示例改写成“所有青少年都只向同伴求助”。
对照例句: In this club, new members tend to ask their peers for help before approaching an adult.
In this club 限定范围;tend to ask 表倾向;before approaching 与主语 new members 共享执行者。
L35 · 将来完成时与未来截止点
by the time the crew will arrive 不用于普通未来时间从句;应使用 arrives。
对照例句: By the time the simulated crew arrives, the support team will have checked every system.
arrives 为未来时间从句的一般现在时;will have checked 表该时点前完成。
L36 · 倍数比较与百分比基数
rose by 120 units 不等于 rose to 120 units;本例只增加20单位。
对照例句: In the fictional budget, maintenance costs rose from 100 units to 120 units, an increase of 20%.
from…to… 给起点终点;an increase of 20% 为同位补充,基数是原来的100。
L37 · 比较级重复与渐变表达
more and more better 不成立;better 已是比较级,应写 better and better。
对照例句: The records became more and more detailed over the course of the study.
more and more detailed 表渐变程度;over the course of… 限定变化发生的时间。
L38 · if、when 后的省略结构
When travelling, the water… 容易把 travelling 的执行者错接成 water;应明确人作主语。
对照例句: When travelling, check current local guidance rather than rely on an old account.
When travelling 相当于 when you are travelling;主句祈使句隐含主语 you,与分词执行者相同。
L39 · wish 后的时态与非现实意义
不要把对现有稿件的遗憾写成 wish the opening is shorter;此处需要过去形式表达非现实。
对照例句: I wish the opening were shorter, because the main point arrives too late.
wish 后 were shorter 表对当前文本的不满意;because 从句说明修改理由。
L40 · where 的地点与条件意义
不要把“实验结束时”写成 where the experiment ends;普通时间关系应写 when the experiment ends。
对照例句: Where the water meets the barrier, the pattern changes.
where 从句指地点;主句 the pattern changes 描述该区域的观察结果。
L41 · with + 宾语 + 补足语
with the observer stood… 不能把一般过去时直接放入该结构;此处应用 standing。
对照例句: With the observer standing at a distance, the handler recorded the animal’s response.
observer 与 standing 是主动关系;with 短语交代背景,主句主语是 handler。
L42 · 被动语态中的时态与体
The signal has recorded 错把信号当记录者;应使用 has been recorded。
对照例句: The signal has been recorded, but the data are still being analysed.
has been recorded 表已完成的记录;are being analysed 表正在进行的被动过程;data 在此按复数处理。
L43 · there be 与存在命题
There have a signal 不成立;应写 There is a signal 或 The receiver has detected a signal。
对照例句: There may be a simpler explanation for the unusual signal.
there may be 为情态存在结构;a simpler explanation 是引入的新信息;for…限定解释对象。
L44 · 限制性与非限制性从句的范围差异
给 who 从句随意加逗号会改变范围:有逗号时通常将参加工作坊作为整组访客的补充信息。
对照例句: The visitors who had attended the workshop recognised the greeting.
who…workshop 是限制性从句,只选出访客中的一部分;没有宣称全部访客参加过。
L45 · no more than 与 not more than
not more than 10 表 ≤10,不是 <10;上限本身也在允许范围内。
对照例句: The summary contained no more than three pages, yet it raised questions the committee had overlooked.
no more than 强调篇幅很短;yet 连接篇幅与作用的反差;had overlooked 表忽略先于摘要提出问题。
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